We were learning to use differnt and better words. We can help each other come up with ideas and Miss J writes one up as we go then we use it to help us.
This is my story.
Tuesday 14 August 2018
A fish story - my bigger Narrative
We practiced narrattive writing again and we used a fish we drew in the morning and you roll a dice and see what to draw then you end up with a fish that's differnt to the others.
We were learning to use differnt and better words. We can help each other come up with ideas and Miss J writes one up as we go then we use it to help us.
This is my story.
We were learning to use differnt and better words. We can help each other come up with ideas and Miss J writes one up as we go then we use it to help us.
This is my story.
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Greetings Paige.
ReplyDeleteYour post about the gold fish is very interesting. I like how you added a
introduction, the problem and the solution! But the ending bit made the story even better and it would make the reader more interested to find out what happens next. Keep it up!
hi paige i like how you made the story it's really good
ReplyDeleteHi Paige,
ReplyDeleteI like your story but some of it didn't make sense. Maybe re-read the story's that you write before posting them on your blog. Keep up the great work =)
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DeleteKia Ora Paige, I'm Poppy from Karoro school. I love to write and read. Even though this story had a few mistakes it was interesting and was really good. I like how you explained what you did and how you kept the story interesting. This narrative is missing a solution. Narratives are story's that have a beginning problem and solution. You are a awesome writer and have great skill. Do you like to write? kei runga noa atu!
ReplyDelete-Poppy