Wednesday 14 March 2018

My descriptive story

I've been writing stories and using See - Feel - Hear to give the reader a good idea in their head.

2 comments:

  1. Greetings Paige,
    It is delightful seeing a great amount of words that year fours find a little hard using, but its amazing seeing you use them! Your layout is wonderful and the amount of effort you put into your drawing is excellent. Did you find some of the words you used in your DLO hard? Although keep it up Paige your doing really well!

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  2. Hi Nyjah thanks for your comment. It was kind of hard to write because it was my first one but not really. Thanks from Paige

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Thank you for you helpful, positive comment on my work.